The pace of the story is good from what I've read so far. Some parts are kind of confusing but it'll be better once the author entered the editing phase. Characters are decently made too. Overall, this one has a lot of potential~
Morororo
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LIKENo need to say sorry!~ I totally understand as I'm not a native English speaker too. Let's strive harderš
Morororo:thank you and sorry if my grammar is confusing i promise I'll do better by studying more.
Blackpaint:No need to say sorry!~ I totally understand as I'm not a native English speaker too. Let's strive harderš