Man that's a great story for a Beginner, Keep on writing and don't forget to improve you skills on the same time. And last don't abandon the story. All the best👍😁
Saromaru
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LIKEMan don't say it like that. I am also a noob in writing it just that I started slightly before you. Although I have not read your whole story so far it's good for a beginner. but only for beginners so don't stop and continue to improve your skills. Try to read your own stories then you will find mistakes easily.
Saromaru:thank you very much, I feel honored that you review my novel, your novel is very good too!.
thank you, maybe one day I'll get better and better at writing though I'm very very focused on the story I get very ignorant on writing things and writing the chapter too short, and also you too do your best! and thank you for the support!
I_just_want_To_eat:Man don't say it like that. I am also a noob in writing it just that I started slightly before you. Although I have not read your whole story so far it's good for a beginner. but only for beginners so don't stop and continue to improve your skills. Try to read your own stories then you will find mistakes easily.
Saromaru:thank you, maybe one day I'll get better and better at writing though I'm very very focused on the story I get very ignorant on writing things and writing the chapter too short, and also you too do your best! and thank you for the support!
it's to read more books. it sounds stupid😅 but it's true by reading you can know what type of Genre is more popular. And by reading you will have more ideas. Don't copy all the content but you will have general direction to write.
Saromaru:umm, no
ah yes i understand your answer but i also improved myself by reading People's novels like how to arrange this and that how to write this and that, and thanks for the advice.
I_just_want_To_eat:it's to read more books. it sounds stupid😅 but it's true by reading you can know what type of Genre is more popular. And by reading you will have more ideas. Don't copy all the content but you will have general direction to write.