Review Detail of Bloom759 in Princess of the Silver Ocean

When you said you were lacking in your grammar or expression on form of the POV, I was quite intrigued by the prologue. It's almost like being hit by a rush of adrenaline, there were some parts which had me confused, but I'm sure it would be addressed in the later chapters. The tragic love story between the ML and FL at the onset makes me wish they do not experience it when she transmigrates. I love your descriptive abilities. Even though there might be a little error due to POV change and context, it's still readable and I'm sure you'd improve greatly