Review Detail of NotBeatrix in Princess of the Silver Ocean

I really love the way the author crafted together all the details! The writing is pretty well done and does a amazing job of setting up the world and the characters! Astoria is a interesting and realtable character and I really loved following her persepctive in the novel! I think the plot is also setting up to be a very interesting piece! I did notice there were a few grammatical errors and the setence structure can sometimes be a little janky but other than that, I enjoyed reading this! Readers should def check this out.