Review Detail of Spirits_everywhere in A coward in the world of against the gods

This story is rather crude and amateurish, but it's refreshing to read. Despite just staying at home and cultivating, he still managed to attract troubles. The saying of "young master dies, the older brother tries to take revenge and dies, the senior tries to take revenge and dies, the master tries to take revenge and dies, the grandmaster tries to take revenge and dies, the elder tries to take revenge and dies, the grand elder tries to take revenge and dies, the sect master tries to take revenge and dies, the clan or sect tries to take revenge and dies" is literally personified here. However, the writing quality is horrible. You have things like "After my father managed to marry my sister and I..." when in fact, there should be a comma between "marry" and "my". Well, read at your own risk. If this fanfic were to be refined, it would be a lot better and enjoyable to read