Review Detail of JUST_LAUGH in A bored Gamer and his budding harem~! (Dropped)

Want fanfic that is worth reading? Then this is for you. Man, this Fanfic is awesome. I like how the author fits every MC action into his personality. The characters that the author created have a personality, unlike the others that make their characters 1Dimensional doll that obey every MC and/or author wishes. ...... What the only problem is some misspellings, not placing the right punctuation, etc.(it's not a bother though) I'm sure it will become perfect since(if I'm correct) the author didn't have an editor