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MMA_SirOwlbie
MMA_SirOwlbieLv12yr
2022-07-05 22:32

Above-average idea, below-average writing. Lots of potential, but the writer clearly needs a ton more practice before being able to pull of what he wants; as it is, the style is inconsistent, sentences are often repetitive, and the descriptions, details, world-building and so forth are done in an odd, jarring manner. The only reason the WQ gets 2 stars is because I've seen far worse on this site. Great idea, though.

Reincarnated as a World

SolitaryMonarch
4.8
314 Chs

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Secrets_Guardian
Secrets_GuardianLv3

This is very good , is a Novel with a true unlimited potential , and that I want to say is , First : please don’t abandon the novel , if you write it good you can obtain a first class novel or even a top novel in this page. Second: if he Is the world I was thinking about he can be something similar to the Heavenly Dao of the novels, that ones who have conscience, like the one of “Journey of the fate destroying emperor” , this is just an idea Third: YOU CAN DO IT , PLEASE CONTINUE THIS , this remember me to some novels that have a lot of potential and it would be a waste to abandon it ( yes I’m traumatized with that because that is VERY common in web novel, please don’t do that i need to go with the therapist another time)

3yr

SolitaryMonarch
SolitaryMonarchAuthor

Is it shameful to give your own book 5 stars? What a joke! If I can't like my own book, who else will? Besides that... I'm seeing all the "Don't drop the book" comments, can you guys also see the pressure that writing a story like this has? ;3 I'd just like to say that I don't plan on doing so at all. I quite like how things are going and I'd like to make this one of the best light novels out there. But thanks for the support guys, I really appreciate it and the fact that I'm getting so much love despite this being my first book is really welcoming. So I thank you.

3yr
TheRebusa
TheRebusaLv1

Reveal spoiler

3yr
SpraAnt
SpraAntLv15

So far this novel is pretty promising. I've read several world building novels like this and the hardest thing for most people is pacing themselves. More often than not they will try to speed things up to get to the "good parts", so I can't help but feel reshreshed to see the author taking their time here... I look forward to seeing how you grow your world.

3yr
Poke_verse
Poke_verseLv2

The idea was good. The execution was terrible. The MC is nothing but a child. The plot is predictable and downright cliche. There isn't really anything that makes me want to read more

2yr
Jso7474
Jso7474Lv14

Love it! I love when protagonists are the world itself! Creating their own species and watching their stories and progression through an all-seeing eye. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see where the story will go!

3yr
IAmALazyIdiot
IAmALazyIdiotLv1

Excellent novel ! The grammatical errors are minimal and its been a while for me to see a novel with god protagonist or something plus The concept is impressive the Mc really push his limits of imagination not some other MCs that think inside the box Its a new novel, hope author doesn't drop this

3yr
TheVersalStudios
TheVersalStudiosLv1

I'll be honest, I like the concept and how the characters are carried, but I don't know if I would recommend it, the armor of the plot is too much at the beginning so do not expect any kind of explanation, literally everything happens just because. An argument that is often repeated a lot in this novel is: Something incredible that probably no one would have thought of. It is not that I complain, but if you stop using it in excess, it would help a lot of dear author. Anyway, if you want to read something new if I recommend this work but do not expect something from the other world.

3yr
Mazio44
Mazio44Lv1

Great book I can't wait till more chapters come out. The main character is a chilled nonchalant character in a good way, can't wait till he gets a girl

3yr
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