Review Detail of CloudHavoc in I Hate Systems

Writing quality is great, I love the style. saw a few typos, but it's come to be expected. Story development is looking good, first 3 chaps of course so I'm limited in foresight. Character development is set to be looking deep, and I fully agree I'm starting to hate systems too, just from how many there are. can't give an accurate on stability yet, but I'm enjoying the world that's being built already, might need some more detaily bits, but I'm looking forward to getting them :) cheers Auth, full 5 from me.