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2022-04-21 09:51

I absolutely hate what happened to Dawn's character. Not only was it a major disappointment you also totally wasted her character which has been building up for the past chapters. Absolutely don't read.

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what happen with dawn and Ben just started reading and was hoping for their eventual development especially with the chapter Destiny and her having the Ben forever bracelet

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