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Disgrace
DisgraceAuthor10mthDisgrace

aUthor, YoU cLeaRy DOn'T unDeRstAnD sWoRdsMeN wHy WoUlD tHey LaUgH? Hey, author here. As of now, I have written 45 chapters, though they haven't all been posted. I have been having a lot of fun writing and even editing (which is normally a nightmare!). As such, it feels like I'm going against myself with this one-star review, but whatever, lol. Now, can I promise a perfect story? No, I do think there are some flaws in a multitude of areas, but it is one I have confidence in. So what is the plot? At first glance, this may seem like RE: zero dark version, but it's not that. The main character, Apollo, only dies repeatedly at the start. From there, he develops split personalities. One is a silly innocent child, and the other a psychotic murderer. His initial goal is revenge, but he does not know who exactly betrayed him. The first major story arc will be centered around this. The reason why I gave this novel the Evil Mc tag is because of how Apollo wishes to solve problems. He hates the world he lives in. For him, his solution was to destroy it. Apollo will experience what morals are and tends to solve his problems through mass murder. As for more details, they are spoilers, at least in my opinion. If I am being honest, I think writing this book is bad for my mental health, lol. Going through so many murders and freakouts can cause subtle changes to my mind. But, it's too fun to stop now. Hope you enjoy!

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The Laughing Swordsman

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The_Abyssal_jester
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mood

GifflarGod:okay i started reading this but i have to know that will he ever get his split personality fixed? will he ever remember what happened? because I can't continue to read a psycopath killer who is more crazy than Joker continue to just laugh, kill and call everyone his mommy while having no idea what he's doing
Someone13
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did this did seriously rate his own story one star? what a disgrace. jks

Little_Foxxy
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hit us with the pun my dude

Someone13:did this did seriously rate his own story one star? what a disgrace. jks
Little_Foxxy
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come here to post sayori

Disgrace
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Little_Foxxy:come here to post sayori
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Scar_Scary
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bring willow back!!

lectrix
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You really ought to have posted 5 stars. It costed you much after all

Disgrace
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lol, u rite. No regrets tho

lectrix:You really ought to have posted 5 stars. It costed you much after all
Darkswan
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deserves more than a one star D

Lucinziel
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my trauma is resurfacing

Little_Foxxy:come here to post sayori
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NAHYAN09
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Is there romance?

Disgrace
DisgraceAuthorDisgrace

At most, they become friends, not that there aren’t romantic feelings. I’m currently working on a side project to get better at writing romance.

NAHYAN09:Is there romance?
Villain116
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Hehehe...

aimzay
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I tipped it to 100 power stones

the_thrill
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why not laugh

BloodySpartan117
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Villain116:Hehehe...
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Mattclaw
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please bring willow back.

BloodySpartan117
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bring on the mass murder

YugureX
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really good story, just a little bit too fast

Shadow_Demon67
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Liked it but had to give up cuz he kept losing his memories

GifflarGod
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okay i started reading this but i have to know that will he ever get his split personality fixed? will he ever remember what happened? because I can't continue to read a psycopath killer who is more crazy than Joker continue to just laugh, kill and call everyone his mommy while having no idea what he's doing