Review Detail of Dokken in The Villainess with a Heroine Harem
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Great premise and plot, but after a while I felt that everything was about dating dating SIMPS. After reading almost 200 chapters, I felt the story lost all progression and plot and ONLY was about dating and sex, so I dropped even when I have payed for alot more chapters. Great book for Yuri lemon lovers, but slow and stale for people that like story with a alot of plot and progression.
The Villainess with a Heroine Harem
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Hi dear, thank you for supporting me so far! I'm sorry about the pacing, I know I have a few issues with details, especially when it comes to some particular characters (>///<). I can't do much about the first world without the change being too jarring and unnatural, but I'll try my best to improve the pacing in world two.