Review Detail of Xenoveia in The Villainess with a Heroine Harem
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I absolutely love this story. The writing is fantastic, I haven’t found any spelling/grammar errors at all when reading and I am at chapter 101. Chapters are uploaded at least once a day if not two times a day, which allows me to not have to dread over cliffhangers as much. The usage of emotion is perfect, and the character development for each character on both an emotional level and overall is absolutely amazing. There isn’t a lot of works that I’ve read that portray emotions and character depth as well as this work and I’ve read a lot. Though the only thing I think could be worked on is the story development and world build, since the information pertaining to those is a little vague, though it does allow for more options for writing in the future, which I can understand. I would highly recommend this work for really anyone, even for people who are not very interested in girl-x-girl relationships, since it allows for the story to flow smoothly. I am looking forward to all the future upadates. Thank you for the amazing work you do.
The Villainess with a Heroine Harem
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Hi! The world building and story development are a little vague now mostly because there needs to be the right ‘opportunity’ for the certain facts to be revealed. For example, even if I really want to make it clear how the transition from world one to world two will take place, I can’t do it before it actually happens (without spoiling everything). As the story progresses, more and more of these details will become clear. That being said, if something really bugs you somewhere, feel free to leave a comment. If it’s not a major spoiler, I’ll definitely clarify. Thank you for your detailed feedback, and I’m glad you like the story so much! >_<
Ok, that makes sense. Possible Spoiler Question. (Replies don’t allow for the spoiler cover option) Will Emilia be able to bring other people with her to new worlds?
DustyDream:Hi! The world building and story development are a little vague now mostly because there needs to be the right ‘opportunity’ for the certain facts to be revealed. For example, even if I really want to make it clear how the transition from world one to world two will take place, I can’t do it before it actually happens (without spoiling everything). As the story progresses, more and more of these details will become clear. That being said, if something really bugs you somewhere, feel free to leave a comment. If it’s not a major spoiler, I’ll definitely clarify. Thank you for your detailed feedback, and I’m glad you like the story so much! >_<image
She will be able to take some people away, and she's always had the 'follower summoning' skill. Both of these actions have certain limitations, though, but they will weaken as Emilia becomes stronger.
Xenoveia:Ok, that makes sense. Possible Spoiler Question. (Replies don’t allow for the spoiler cover option) Will Emilia be able to bring other people with her to new worlds?
Ok, thank you for answering my question. Emilia’s ‘follower summoning’ skill was a little confusing, so this helped clear up what confusion I had.
DustyDream:She will be able to take some people away, and she's always had the 'follower summoning' skill. Both of these actions have certain limitations, though, but they will weaken as Emilia becomes stronger.image