Review Detail of noname_marco in Fairy Tail: Sun Eater

I was having high hopes for this story since it over my spot as the number 1 fairy tail fanfiction on this site for a while. I read up to chapter 6 and I can't read anymore. The grammar is okay it could be better but the author isn't English so makes sense. But the dialogue can improve as it feels forced, weird, and plain robotic. But one of the problems I have with this story is just how lucky the mc is at times. But my main issue is how the master of Cait Shelter knows about the dragon slayers' time traveling. I get the man is even older than zeref but he isn't on the same level. And how would he even know about the eclipse as its a secret very few know? And why the old man tell 6-year-olds about it. What would happen if people knew time travel is possible and has been done before. Think about the choas it would choas. And the old man isn't an idiot either, he lived for more than 400 years. Like come on think author