Review Detail of boogyman23 in Monarch of Slaughter

the translation, or english of the author( idk which it is but the way them words is written) is a bit broken and disjointed. otherwise a very good novel, the world is slowly getting fleshed out and I like that we only know as much as the MC there is no omnipotence or system so far and things are taking their time. also we start with a natural birth instead of a death or any other trope, so there are some light time skips early on, but they're sparse considering they could be done repeatedly. so over all good, just needs an editor!