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Rabiya_Kk
Rabiya_KkLv12yrRabiya_Kk

I have readed till 5 chapters and I dont know anything about mc. i dont know his motives,his vision,his interest,his hobby and i dont even know what i read till chapter 5 even though the Grammer is good. there is a mystery to the mc.too much mystery that I dont know what's happening.? I don't know why he solve 20 crimes? i dont know if he solved 20 crimes in the first place? I dont know how he solved 20 crimes? why he learning laws? why he is super knowledgable.? why he burned stuffs.? why he acting like a robot? .why does he want to learn photography? why he love water? why he cooks so good? why he looks so good?

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Life is Tough

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God_Hand
God_HandAuthorGod_Hand

I didn't know about it till the and if the second volume and fourth volume. Two separate things. the end of Volume Two tells about what he actually is and volume 3 is about his past while ht fourth volume is about what he did after coming to Marvel. And the end of the volume 2 and 3 are closely related to the the storytime with me and tales of the outcast.

Pclerk
PclerkLv14Pclerk

You know, the rating you gave does not match up with what you said at all…

Simone007
Simone007Lv14Simone007

Maybe he is being lenient to a new author on this site.

Pclerk:You know, the rating you gave does not match up with what you said at all…
Pclerk
PclerkLv14Pclerk

Authors need accurate evaluations of what is being written so they know where and how much needs to be improved on. If the evaluations are not to a set standard it makes it appear the author is not improving. Bad evals are not the end of the world, they can help authors grow and learn. If there is improvement, you can delete your review and make another one showing were the author is heading… in your opinion of course.

Simone007:Maybe he is being lenient to a new author on this site.