Review Detail of weirdguy2022 in Lord of The Abyss

Item: Lord of The Abyss
Rating: 3.2

Review detail

weirdguy2022Lv32yrweirdguy2022

I am honestly disappointed it had a good start. Then the mc started becoming more and more of a side character than an mc, barely see him only a few mentions. and so many chapters that are information dumping. if your gonna world build this is not the way to do it. by making the mc barley relevant. its like i am reading a different story -like the mc before he started become more and more humane

Lord of The Abyss

Phantom_Zone

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Phantom_ZoneAuthorPhantom_Zone

I actually realized this problem. Thanks for pointing it out. I am actually trying to make him more focused in the story. Thank you again for the review. It's extremely helpful.

2yr

weirdguy2022Lv3weirdguy2022

Glad to be of a help

Phantom_Zone:I actually realized this problem. Thanks for pointing it out. I am actually trying to make him more focused in the story. Thank you again for the review. It's extremely helpful.

2yr