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a_nomora
a_nomoraLv13yra_nomora

The story is nice and all... but sometimes it feels like you write in a hurry, I mean, you sometimes skip events a lot and also pass some nice points in the story so easily. it's as if you want to force the story to move faster. please don't hurry and take your time, let the story grow by itself But except that everything else is fine, I like the characters and the mysterious storyline.

Life didn't get easier, even in another world.

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daniz_
daniz_Authordaniz_

I actually feel the same. I tried to summarize some less important parts but it didn't go as I wanted Thank you for pointing out my mistakes, I will try more

Olympu
OlympuLv1Olympu

I can reason with this comment, as I made this mistake in one of my own books.