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delores
deloresLv112yr
2022-05-13 21:08

So I am writing this review after reading chapter 254 (such a touching chapter) l. To be honest I hated Kairen so much in the first few chapters, and that's because the transmigration books I read about mostly have their MCs move on quickly from their initial confusion, but that aside, his stupidity does add to the story, it's not that you get used to it, but it gets better over time. If I had a query with this book it would be the fact that you don't see his friends as often in more recent chapters. But since the book follows Kairen's POV you understand that except for Ariyan, Kain related things most things subconsciously become secondary to him. It's a fun read especially if you like mystery, action and comedy, so don't be deterred by the MC at the beginning ☺️

Life didn't get easier, even in another world.

daniz_
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daniz_
daniz_Author

Ahem, it's the author here... Well, as all of you might have noticed, I have quite a lot of spelling and grammatical errors in my novel. I am really trying to solve them but there are still some that I miss. English is not my first language so it's a little bit hard... So I wanted to apologize for making so many mistakes. Thank you for your understanding.

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NotBeatrix
NotBeatrixLv2

I think the story is off a pretty good start! There are grammatical and sentence structure errors here and there, but the author said he's doing his best to improve on that. Plus, despite the errors, it still does not take away from the interesting plot and storyline! I think Kairen is so far relatable and you can understand the world from his perspective. I also sympathize with him and his struggles and I can't wait to see more into this second world he has been taken into! Keep up the awesome work, author! And, readers? You should give this story a read!

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a_nomora
a_nomoraLv1

The story is nice and all... but sometimes it feels like you write in a hurry, I mean, you sometimes skip events a lot and also pass some nice points in the story so easily. it's as if you want to force the story to move faster. please don't hurry and take your time, let the story grow by itself But except that everything else is fine, I like the characters and the mysterious storyline.

3yr
RAMINATOR
RAMINATORLv15

MC has no backbone and sometimes is the smartest person around and then they are the dumbest person who can't understand anything. The only things the MC's friends do is yell at him nonstop, act superior to him, blame him for things they did, and never take into consideration what he wants to do.

2yr
PrugnaKerai
PrugnaKeraiLv2

It is evident that the author's first language is not English, however, they have done an impressive attempt in writing this novel, so a well done to them. There is a delicate and nice balance between dialogue and description, which is tricky to achieve. I would say that there are moments where the description is rushed and incomplete, there is so much more potential in captivating the reader's imagination, the author just needs to tweak this. Otherwise, a good start.

3yr
Mahaiye
MahaiyeLv3

loving the story so far! mc gets pushed around a lot as far as I have read but it seems necessary to develop the story? It's not too annoying yet so I guess that much is alright. Keep it up!

3yr
itsDanielJohnson
itsDanielJohnsonLv3

I shouldn’t be impatient and should follow the MC determination BUT!This novel need more recognition!Sure, 1 million is a lot but for me, it’s not…

2yr
wudux
wuduxLv2

please 🙏🥺 please give u novel tag GAY be couse u lead person is Gay. why are u gay?))) just be careful 🤠№🥳🥴🥳🥴🥳🥴🥳🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥺🥴🥴🥴🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

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MBE1
MBE1Lv5

at first I liked it, I thought It was good to have some changes in the default settings of MCs being fearless and I thought I would see some character growth, but he stays with same personality, at least till chapter 56 I couldn't continue after that. . . if you don't like whimp idiotic (not always idiot) MC, then this book isn't for you.

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