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Master_Vaders
Master_VadersLv42yr
2022-07-06 08:08

left everything at 3 stars but the story development cuz any system that forces user to do a mission or X punishment is kinda garbage.......

Omniverse Mayhem

IWhoMustNotBeName
4.6
140 Chs

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Rocky350
Rocky350Lv1

You didn't even read story and left a review after 2 chapters. Sure enough trashes like you are everywhere. πŸ—‘

2yr
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Fellbane
FellbaneLv11

And simps like you are everywhere too

Rocky350:You didn't even read story and left a review after 2 chapters. Sure enough trashes like you are everywhere. πŸ—‘
2yr
3
SidNaz
SidNazLv4

BotπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Fellbane:And simps like you are everywhere too
2yr
Fellbane
FellbaneLv11

Top🀣🀣

SidNaz:BotπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
2yr
1
LUBT
LUBTLv2

you do know a chinese mtl has better writing than this, the arifureta arc is to long and the conversation between Charakters is cringe

Rocky350:You didn't even read story and left a review after 2 chapters. Sure enough trashes like you are everywhere. πŸ—‘
2yr
3
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Sukuna_R
Sukuna_RLv11

Reveal spoiler

3yr

IWhoMustNotBeName
IWhoMustNotBeNameAuthor

Hey, it's your everyday Author Here!! Since started writing after those damnable exams....so many mistakes might be there and I'm fixing it..... I am sure some may not like the way I write.... What can I do? After all I'm an inexperience Author who just started writing.... My Last Fanfic doesn't count since I copied half of the words from another...Many blamed me because of it....so I stopped writing that one.. . . . . Please do tell if anything is wrong... whether it is grammar or sentence.... Also give some ideas about the story, girls or powers or even the world's name he should travel in future....Also,..all kinds of greetings are welcome here..(if you understand what I'm hinting then.. Congratulations, you're once a millenia genius.)

3yr
IWhoMustNotBeName
IWhoMustNotBeNameAuthor

Hey guys! Since it's my story, I have right to be shameless, ain't I. And, I have already said that this fanfiction is AU. For example:- Harry Potter was known to a good, naive young boy but in my fanfic he may be dark and evil. Similarly, Danzo, the one eyed B#β‚Ήβ‚Ή_ was evil to the core however here his karma may be more than Uzumaki Naruto.. Don't take this seriously it's just a suggestion..

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Dr_Chad
Dr_ChadLv13

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

3yr
BroBeforeHoe
BroBeforeHoeLv13

i like how the story going so far, even though there's something that shouldnt be there like those typical chinese tropes xD but yeah its okay i guess. try to read 5-10 chapter before u drop it. Adios

3yr
UchihaZenn
UchihaZennLv5

Nice story πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’ Nice story πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’ Nice story πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’

3yr
loooooool
looooooolLv4

Good story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
SidNaz
SidNazLv4

Good Beginnings......Very Good Grammar... Excellent backstory and explanation. Chapters are sort...I really like sort chapter since it is easy to read and understand.. And There are not many who nowadays write in sort chapters.. almost every authors are writing either long or super long...For example, Wish of a dragon. Every chapters are 100,000 words.. even though I like that story many would get bored reading long chapters. . . So Good Luck and keep posting everyday!

3yr
YWD_
YWD_Lv14

Hmm My advice is don't be too quick to make the main character too strong, if possible, the original main character, don't be too transparent, pity him, make a scene behind about Ehit knowing the main character and or make the villain element more stable it's up to you add more face slapping xina young master so far so good

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