This just became one of my favorites. Story was always good but the ending of first arc just made it amazing. It is like i paid an author money to make a fanfiction. It has one of my favorite genres 'Gamer' but also 'World Hopping' and also managed to make both work. Most Gamer stories make main characters to op to even enjoy the story and most World Hopping ones changes the setting like author changes clothes. This here managed to both make gamer in that specific flavor that is extremely good to read and also managed to make the setting feel like mc really lived in there. My only complain is upload frequency. 'I want moar' in caveman language. I wish author good luck in future and just wanted to say this is a good fanfiction.

Do I even need to write something? Well I think it is very balanced in plot character development and the powers from ROB which are in acceptable range and not over the top like having Naruto or Harry Potters powers they just suck all the fun from novel and make it game. You've got good thing going on dost keep it up.

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Neutral review The beginning is really good, I loved the MC, how he ended up in Westeros, what he became ect But when Robert enters the story everything has changed, he has become arrogant, he forgot what world he is in, that this Robert is the one who killed Raegar Targaryen and laughs over the corpse of two children who are his cousins ​​and an innocent woman without any remorse, it is a lord who has every right to kill him without any pretext, he should have stayed away from them . But above all he should have lied about his history, said that he is the second son of an average family, wherever his father is from Pentos and that his mother is Westerosis, just to explain his upbringing. In short an explanation that does not place it at the bottom of the food chain but also not so high, He could have been an independent knight, in short, the way of acting does not correspond to Westerosis and therefore, it cringes. The story is quite readable and we get caught up in the rhythm, I recommend reading it, I had to stop at chapter 17 because of the problems announced above but I know that it won't bother everyone

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I don't like some things in fanfic, but who has ever written something that everyone likes? so I won't specify, but one thing I like a lot about all fics is a different approach and that there's no harem. I use google traudor, so I don't know if your grammar is good because it fixes some mistakes by itself when translating, I'll be giving 5 stars for being able to read normally without guessing words ^^. the update is a little slow, but i think it's just a hobby to write this fic the finnal is studying medicine ne, so 5 stars. I thought the development of the story was good, mainly because I didn't mess around to resolve matters or let them resolve themselves to follow the original error, 5 stars. I like the character, he's not afraid to use what he knows and not to offend anyone, he does what he wants, he doesn't find excuses for not acting as he wants, 5 stars. It's the world of ice and fire so far, I only watched GOT, but it was poorly explored, after all it's a series, so far you've been exploring the world well and expanding. 5 star. this is my most sincere evaluation, I hope I don't offend anyone, but everyone has a taste, I don't expect you to agree with me, but if you think I said something wrong, just comment and we can discuss ^^. (Google translator)

this is actually a nice story good character , not too op mc keep it author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

this story is so good at first I thought it was going to be boring but it started to get better each chapter