Not gonna attempt to read a dxd fanfic where the Gremory, THE GREMORY, abandoned or abused or treated the mc as a failure. That's not even fanfiction ar a Alternative Universe since the are one of the few caring devils of their own subordinates muchless there own family. And for those who are about to whine uselessly that this is a fanfiction or Alternative Universe.. it is not. Because for it to be a fanfiction of the original it HAS to be based off the original.

I’m going to write a huge review and take all your time. The big problem is the Main Character has a skill creation system and the author can’t balance it. He makes skills left and right and in the future will have an easy way to access points to make more skills or he can just sacrifice life from his immortal life span. It really took every bit of tension from the story at the start.

Well i don't like reboots but i'm hyped on this one :) i hope u will update more than 1 chap per week :3 oh and can u explain why he didnt get emotions with the memos ? Its bc of god or system got rid of them?

First One Review of this Fanfic. I hope you don't drop this novel. Though you have changed lots of Things.

Not even going to attempt to read a story that has only had 6 chapters in 3 months. I already know the update stability is going to be atrocious.

another bad take on a well-known universe. An angsty story following one of the worst tropes out there, abandonment. It's even worse when the author makes characters that would normally never abandon someone, do so, just like some of the worst Naruto and Harry Potter fanfictions out there.There's not even a worthy reason for the neglect, it's not like the MC is a result of cheating or NTR from one of his parents, he's a PUREBLOODED devil that was just abandoned, why? Because the author thinks that having an angsty protagonist is fun, fun fact, it's not fun to read, at all. Honestly, you shouldn't bother reading the trope bs of a story

basically a cross between the concept behind "Deal with the Devil" and the usual Gremory neglected child bs - the mc is reincarnated with a system, as the neglected child of the Gremory clan who thought being Sirzechs and Grayfia's kid he was born weak and because of that no one cares about, he then does a weird ritual that kills the "original him" and result in the mc taking over and him gaining the bloodlines of the Original Satans. All in all: mid

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I liked the plot, the MC is Good, Idk what to say overall the fic is one the best hsdxd fics I've read in my life