Review Detail of Not_larry in Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)

I'm at chapter 53 right now and I am really liking how vividly the world is described, also Matt's monologue and the consitency it's being described in. It feel like with the way you wrote that you are setting the story up to be a confession/story that Matt tells.Not really anything in depth as I'm not a writer myself, but i am really enjoying yhe story and wanted to share that. Big ups!