Review Detail of timmyboy in Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
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The author has a big heart. Most books have great world building, great story, great writing. However most books still fail. The reason, they fail is in the character department. The characters are none existent, they are robots, psychopaths. This book does it differently, the characters feel human. It sounds like such a small thing. However it what differentiates an ordinary novel to a great book. So if you are an aspiring author, this book is a great study on how improve your character design.
Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
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Cosmic_SpiritKingLv1Cosmic_SpiritKing
Guiltythree:Thank you! I do try to treat my characters as human beings. For me, it's the most interesting part of any book.
Ethereal_VexageLv11Ethereal_Vexage
Guiltythree:Thank you! I do try to treat my characters as human beings. For me, it's the most interesting part of any book.
