Review Detail of Leighsi in I Became a Pawn Shop Owner

My first review!! Sadly, it’s not a positive one. The story started okay. It’s not a great work of literature. You take it as the entertainment it is. But…somewhere along the way the grammar devolved so badly that whole chapters were almost unreadable. Then around chapter 135 it becomes an entirely different story with a few similar elements. If I’d paid for this novel I’d have been pissed off. Basically, this author needs to do better with proofreading and continuity before posting. If it’s not ready for reading it shouldn’t be uploaded. Heck, you don’t want to do it send it to me. I’ll proof it for you. It’s really too bad because even with the horrible grammar, I was getting into the story. I’d love to know how it ends.