Review Detail of akasuna123 in Birth of the Golden Sovereign: Rise of Pride

Item: Birth of the Golden Sovereign: Rise of Pride
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Birth of the Golden Sovereign: Rise of Pride

SevenHeavenlySins

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SevenHeavenlySinsAuthorSevenHeavenlySins

I never explained what he looked like and I was going to do that in later chapters

latheef_shaik:if that guy is imposter , at least make something off feeling from him mysteries are good but they fail miserably if no one notices them give us hints of mystery

2yr

SevenHeavenlySinsAuthorSevenHeavenlySins

Why... i would like your opinion on how I can make my fanfic better

2yr

latheef_shaikLv4latheef_shaik

one advice , write a mc who acts realistic no sane person goes simping in a world when you die everyday also god being simp is enough for readers to leave the fanfic

SevenHeavenlySins:Why... i would like your opinion on how I can make my fanfic better

2yr

SevenHeavenlySinsAuthorSevenHeavenlySins

Okay but tell me do you really think that guy is god, not some imposter... just a thought

latheef_shaik:one advice , write a mc who acts realistic no sane person goes simping in a world when you die everyday also god being simp is enough for readers to leave the fanfic

2yr

latheef_shaikLv4latheef_shaik

if that guy is imposter , at least make something off feeling from him mysteries are good but they fail miserably if no one notices them give us hints of mystery

2yr