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Msotra
MsotraLv43yr
2021-09-02 08:24

I'll be brief if you are not a Rias fan fanfic this is not for you well the story started of good and the character could do a bit of development but went down hill when he is one shot even after years of training by some then reincarnated 😔😑😑

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Onxio
OnxioLv5

what did you say at the end? so mc was reincarnated then 1 shot then reincarnated again in another body or world?

ViolGrande_69
ViolGrande_69Author

Lol yeah that one chapter it make it downhill quite a bit... but I made it so, so that the story can progressed as I envisioned real sorry if it what tick you off and dropping it, But if you dicided to comeback It will get better at the letter one trust me :) Happy with the review bro, thanks.

Msotra
MsotraLv4

No what ticks me off is that he trained for years and ended up like that so in short it kinda makes it seem like the guy was just wasting his time

ViolGrande_69:Lol yeah that one chapter it make it downhill quite a bit... but I made it so, so that the story can progressed as I envisioned real sorry if it what tick you off and dropping it, But if you dicided to comeback It will get better at the letter one trust me :) Happy with the review bro, thanks.
Msotra
MsotraLv4

it's like this man got wishes reborn then trained for some years and first fight if you can even call it that got one shot

Onxio:what did you say at the end? so mc was reincarnated then 1 shot then reincarnated again in another body or world?
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