I liked the tempo and the way it was written, there were a lot of changes compared to the original but it's great.
Lucif3r_069
Liked by 6 people
LIKEwasn't changes it was inconsistencies with the whole timeline like he slept with someone who according to the actual timeline died before his birth so he couldn't really change that as it happened before he was born but he didn't go back in time or nothing she was just alive and well and author acted like she wasn't ever dead and you know it was on that one chapter mother and daughter duo and that was one of the first few chapters so yea and that whole chapter was a mess