All in all it's a pretty good story. Main issues i have with the story is the character design and the feel of the story, i don't know if the author wanted to create a story with an underdog feeling but the plot gives itself to this trope, the problem. is that the MC is a bit to unlikeable for that to really work as of right now. The MC is still in the development phase but some action and reactions kinda make me hope that the Gods come fast and kill him. Maybe it was my mood as i read the story but I kinda got a depressiv vibe from the story, when I hoped for something at least a bit more training and action heavy. All in all the story is fine and still developing but the MC Character just doesn't do it for me.
Master4thWall
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LIKEBlur182:hi, may I ask that you review my fic too, I'm having trouble having proper reviews, I only have 1 so far. advice will be nice, maybe tags? idk. feel free to reject tho.