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Lasagnaaa
LasagnaaaLv52yrLasagnaaa

As the Proofreader-In-Chief, this is a really good novel that I recommend. Has good grammar and plot that can inspire a newbie to start writing. Without me, 4th would have been lost. I helped steer him in the right way.

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The Cursed Gamer

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Master4thWall
Master4thWallAuthorMaster4thWall

Sensei

InsertaGoodName
InsertaGoodNameLv4InsertaGoodName

ey can ya give me the discord link? the one on the op ff is invalid

Vostarian
VostarianLv4Vostarian

Do the spoilers.

iwillkms
iwillkmsLv11iwillkms

you gonna be active on discord?

InsertaGoodName:ey can ya give me the discord link? the one on the op ff is invalid
InsertaGoodName
InsertaGoodNameLv4InsertaGoodName

why ask that?

iwillkms:you gonna be active on discord?
Lasagnaaa
LasagnaaaLv5Lasagnaaa

I told 4th. hopefully he'll update.

InsertaGoodName:ey can ya give me the discord link? the one on the op ff is invalid
Lasagnaaa
LasagnaaaLv5Lasagnaaa

Mc is beta cuck male

Vostarian:Do the spoilers.
Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

I'm Hesitant it's another MHA Start, like God it's so overused and unless MC is a Villain and doesn't play hero it will be same rehashed nonsense as always.

Lasagnaaa
LasagnaaaLv5Lasagnaaa

So far. we've not touched the mha canon. it's mainly the mc's life + Gamer elements in mha world. there will be material used from the normal mha and vigilantes, so it definitely won't feel like it's lacking something. I recommend just reading a few chaps, see if it's to your taste.

Ballad:I'm Hesitant it's another MHA Start, like God it's so overused and unless MC is a Villain and doesn't play hero it will be same rehashed nonsense as always.
FrightKnight88
FrightKnight88Lv14FrightKnight88

can you proofread the synopsis then bro? you aren't leaving me with a lot of confidence in it having good grammar

Lasagnaaa
LasagnaaaLv5Lasagnaaa

proofreader and editor are two different things. editor = edits the text making it better in quality, grammar or plot wise. proofreader = pointing out any inconsistencies related to the plot or telling the author about parts that can he changed or deleted. but I'll tell 4th to fix it.

FrightKnight88:can you proofread the synopsis then bro? you aren't leaving me with a lot of confidence in it having good grammar
Immortal_chen
Immortal_chenLv1Immortal_chen

I bow down to thee. Thou Who has knowledge shall reach the top.

Lasagnaaa:proofreader and editor are two different things. editor = edits the text making it better in quality, grammar or plot wise. proofreader = pointing out any inconsistencies related to the plot or telling the author about parts that can he changed or deleted. but I'll tell 4th to fix it.
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv13ThanatosGreekGod

Please tell me your joking 😅 I feel like you are but….

Lasagnaaa:Mc is beta cuck male
Lasagnaaa
LasagnaaaLv5Lasagnaaa

I am, but aren't... you'll see for yourself

ThanatosGreekGod:Please tell me your joking 😅 I feel like you are but….
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ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv13ThanatosGreekGod

hmm Ive read to the most recent chapter and I wouldnt necessarily call him a cuck because I instantly assume his wife/girlfriend is cheating on him when what you really mean is he acts like a servant to nejire so hes like a simp basically (cuck works but I assumed the wrong definition) I agree on the beta part it was a fair evaluation he acts like hes tough and all but it annoys me that when someone picks a fight with him he avoids it thinking “Hes only a kid” or “Its not worth my time” Moral of the story? I gave an unexpectedly long comment to a simple statement

Lasagnaaa:I am, but aren't... you'll see for yourself
Christopher_3763
Christopher_3763Lv1Christopher_3763

Something I notived is that at the start of MC's first reincarnation, everyone is speaking Japanese. This stays consistent until Midnight tells one of the students to replace the "Cannot" in their hero name (That name was stupid btw) with "Can't" and I am pretty sure that doesn't translate.