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Asteria_Azizella
Asteria_AzizellaLv143yr
2021-11-10 13:34

The first 40 chapters were really good, story was developing, there was also relationship building involved, and the story was well paced. That's where the good things end, after chapter 40 it gets very, very lackluster. The story is all over the place, new characters are not even described (Li Tong), the story is all over the place, nothing is explained, a ton of time skips, not to mention children do not appear at all. Story that was about childcre, her wanting to change her relationship with her daughter and... in the end she barely even appears. Overall nice concept that gets you excited but the longer you read the more you realise how bad and lackluster it gets.

After Getting Abandoned, I Choose to Become the General’s Wife

JQK
4.6
398 Chs

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kimz929
kimz929Lv5

True it's more like she is trying to improve her relationship with her step mom n all who have wronged her in her 1st life instead of the one she actually wanted to improve

2yr
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alex_m
alex_mLv13

Love it!![img=faceslap][img=faceslap] Does anyone has a link for the raws?😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥲🥲🥰🥰🥲🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

3yr

Izanami_
Izanami_Lv3

really awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really liked it. i guess there would be lots of cute scene of both children.... looking forward to it.................

3yr
rachelesque
rachelesqueLv15

After rolling my eyes through so many stories where the FL is a doctor/singer/hacker/gamer/etc. that speaks 30 languages, it’s a breath of fresh air to have a grounded, realistic FL. Fang Ya is a woman who couldn’t catch a break after her divorce and lived a hard life. Upon going back in time, she strives to make all the right decisions this time. She’s no genius, but she’s a smart, sensible woman who’s learned from the mistakes of her previous life. The pacing is a bit slow, so the story is only really getting started after 40 chapters, but what I’ve read so far gives me hope that this will turn out to be a good read.

3yr
avidreader1
avidreader1Lv13

Reveal spoiler

3yr
_Annie1997_
_Annie1997_Lv3

It's kind of annoying that the author keeps calling the neighbor the large woman or fat woman and never gives her a proper name. Also that MC decided to forgive her stepmom without her ever saying I'm sorry for having sold you in the past and everything I did before and also to help her stepbrother was a crazy decision in my opinion... But so far is ok to read in your free time, is not the best but also not the worst.

3yr
lullacy
lullacyLv4

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3yr
Peach_Princess
Peach_PrincessLv14

I've read the trial story.. and I really like it.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ can someone tell me is it an original story or is it a translated ? if it's a translated, anyone got the raw???? if it's an original, I hope the author will write it till finish, and make it into a hiatus like others stories that I read😭😭😭

3yr
Ale_Eonnie
Ale_EonnieLv4

I'm honestly perplexed at this point. It started really well, I liked it very much. But now the FL doesn't seem like she was in the beginning. all her resolutions seem vain, she just stands there, not doing anything, she just cries and wants someone to rely on. I don't say it's wrong wanting to have someone to rely on, but you want back in time, you lived in an era where you saw that women has the power to stand for themselves and rely on their men when they are in search of comfort but aren't solely relying on them. I don't know. I'm going to continue for now, but if this goes on, I'm going to drop it.

3yr
Dramebaaz28
Dramebaaz28Lv15

Does anyone know the name Of the raw? Interesting story. Hope It gets picked and doesn’t lose the plot in between. Looking forward to more couple scenes.

3yr
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