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Review Detail of Just_Alan in All-Powerful : Summoning System

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This is a great fanfiction. Recently I have been tried of all the copy paste fanfics on this site. But this fanfiction was a breath of fresh air. This fanfiction is set in an original world created by the author. The MC has a summoner system which allows him to summon characters from fictions such as anime/manga/movie etc. I like the system and the balance, the summons are pretty OP but he wont be so OP that it renders his development boring. The MC still has to grow strong but his summons are pretty OP. The world development is done pretty well. As this is a kingdom building novel the revelations of world is done pretty well. He is still in a low level kingdom at Chapter 66, so this has a promising future. Next is the characters, I love their interactions and also love the OC characters. The MC has a pretty good development. In Chapter 14 it would seem like he would be a beta MC but I would highly suggest you listen to the authors note on that chapter and wait for chapter 20, the conclusion is pretty satisfying. I also doubted whether the author could execute it but I was so excited after chapter 20. He isnt someone who is a cold blooded psychopath that he kills anything that moves or annoyes him. But he wont give any mercy for his enemies he doesnt take risk and executes them so they dont come back in the future to bite him, and he is someone who is alert and sus of people he did not summon until they can prove their trust. Again this is after the character development arc in the beginning chapters. The writing is much better than what I expect from this site. I personally havent found any errors that made me stop reading, there is small typos and once or twice the I isnt capitalized. But I can overlook that and it isnt something that cant be fixed from simple edits. This is a great story for a beginner writer and I am looking forward to your future work author and I hope you best of luck. Sorry for the big review but I highly recommend this fanfiction.

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I_S_Rift
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Thank you <3

iori143
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romance? harem?

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Is this harem?

I_S_Rift:Thank you <3