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howlsjks
howlsjksLv22yr
2022-01-18 12:34

All i can say after reading less than a hundred chaps: > great action/fighting > I thought its bro m but its not > giants are OP > Wondering what's the capacity of MC's eye to store more people XD

Firstborn Twisted Time

MaryahLu
5.0
292 Chs

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MaryahLu
MaryahLuAuthor

I cracked up with your last sentence . anyway ,thank you for keeping up ☺ 😌

2yr
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shjAj_Shop
shjAj_ShopLv10

maybe infinite 🤣😅

MaryahLu:I cracked up with your last sentence . anyway ,thank you for keeping up ☺ 😌
2yr
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livu_luxury
livu_luxuryLv10

i go with the dragon

2yr
2
howlsjks
howlsjksLv2

yes dragons too

livu_luxury:i go with the dragon
2yr
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MaryahLu
MaryahLuAuthor

I appreciate your visit and I hope you keep reading my work. 😊 If you have any doubts about this novel, comment here with your questions ⬇️

3yr

livu_luxury
livu_luxuryLv10

I've read until the 50+ chapters and it keep me on the beat, after the explaining phase on early chapters the rest run smoothly, making more each chapters interesting and exciting 💯   This is what I felt after reading until Chapter 56:   ✍Writing quality: The writing quality is good. No glaring grammatical errors or typos. Its too few if it does have any mistakes.    ⏰Updating stability: the author updates one chapter daily ❤   🎠Story development: the story is optimally paced. The two MCs are still kids but very OP. the story revolves around their brotherhood.... which I really like. I like it when stories don't include romance or anything alike. Action and adventure are great here.     🌏World Background: At first i thought that the world here would be simple and straight but its not. There's vast number of powers and races involved in this story but it won't give you confusion or information overload. d author explains well the complexity of its world.    💁‍♀️Character Design: I love the way author created the averaging 14 years old kids here. i love their mischievousness and sudden coldness when in times of battle and they are too adorable in happy times.   👏in short, this work is a gem! 💎 💎 💎

3yr
ZiezieMillan_11
ZiezieMillan_11Lv10

The start is good, easy to imagine. The writing quality is decent. The world scene is subtly presented. The work has potential. This is interesting. I dont have any negative reviews with the story yet. Keep up the good work. :)

3yr
haphazars
haphazarsLv2

the kind of adventure i am searching 4!! give this novel a chance! i vouch for this! der are two ML and i am loving both! the two is pretty unique

3yr
Fredmatitay_27
Fredmatitay_27Lv2

Very interesting story. The place and situation is clearly described. While reading, I keep on asking my self "what is happening?" and "waaaa." It keeps me curious.

3yr
Jonas321
Jonas321Lv10

Reading the story is enjoyable and fun. The chapters are crafted to perfection. The author's descriptive skills really put him inside the novel. All I can say is that this novel is a masterpiece waiting for tremendous success. So, I'm going to give the work five stars!

3yr
Little_Foxxy
Little_FoxxyLv13

Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.

3yr
Pankay_Pncake
Pankay_PncakeLv10

HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!! d writing quality is gud & story development is well planned! I thirst for more each time I finish one....the author did a good job at describing each scenarios, specially the fighting scenes. I luv this! keep writing please.

3yr
ampihamioj
ampihamiojLv2

Wow! this is a great book. I found myself fully immersed in this story,I hardly read stories about magic and supernatural beings but this story had me hooked up. Kudos to the writer,I hope you continue your daily update 👏 👍 😀 👌

2yr
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