Review Detail of Dana_Brew in Mob Without System In Naruto World

Item: Mob Without System In Naruto World
Rating: 4.2

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Dana_BrewLv42yrDana_Brew

you need to make edit 20 chapter(i only read 20 chapter)bcs its hard to understand who is talking mc talking with tenten then he said "boss gang a and gang b are dissapear" then hokage talking to the council.. TF...

Mob Without System In Naruto World

Yukki_Sensei

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MericasReaderLv13MericasReader

honestly delay to make begging more legible so more people will come, into the story and stick around instead of dropping

Yukki_Sensei:I will only mention POVs at later chapters is it okay?or all chapters but it will take time and also it delay mass release of 10 chapters tommorow. Which option would you choose? Give me reply in 9 hours!!!!!

2yr

Dana_BrewLv4Dana_Brew

you need to edit*

2yr

Yukki_SenseiAuthorYukki_Sensei

I will only mention POVs at later chapters is it okay?or all chapters but it will take time and also it delay mass release of 10 chapters tommorow. Which option would you choose? Give me reply in 9 hours!!!!!

2yr

Tchao707Lv5Tchao707

you can probably read the rest on scribblehub if you want it was drop by the original author but it has 158 chapter

2yr

Dana_BrewLv4Dana_Brew

you better edit the chapter first.. its better to fix it now than have people drop it before they reach later chapter

Yukki_Sensei:I will only mention POVs at later chapters is it okay?or all chapters but it will take time and also it delay mass release of 10 chapters tommorow. Which option would you choose? Give me reply in 9 hours!!!!!

2yr

Yukki_SenseiAuthorYukki_Sensei

okay

Dana_Brew:you better edit the chapter first.. its better to fix it now than have people drop it before they reach later chapter

2yr