Review Detail of Yumbrella in The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox

Okay, so I loved this author's other novel very very much that I read this with the hope that it would be almost the same but it wasn't similar in the least. It just seemed different and reading more chapters, I found this novel to be really good in its own right. So I'm going to rid of my bias and point out what I liked about this novel. The writing quality was really good like how it was for your other novel. The narration tone was surprisingly different compared to the other novel. I didn't know the narration tone of an author could be changed( i thought it was unique like a fingerprint)...But for some reason, I loved this narration style a whole lot more than the other novel. Now chapter updates are really good, almost daily releases with some bonus releases here and there. The chapters aren't small and are actually bigger than average. The plot is both cliche and unique. Typical transmigration with a system but with its own unique twists and ideas. Foreshadowing builds up quite a lot of anticipation for the future. But there are some bad plotholes that I'm not going to state in order to not spoil. I'm quite excited about the future plot. Now characters are really well developed. The MC, her friends, and others have their own distinct personalities and traits, You could actually identify a character from one or two dialogues. The side characters aren't that much neglected which is nice but I hope for more side stories from other's perspectives. The world is really really abstract right now. I can for some reason get a grasp on the world. There has been info on the rulers but I hope for there to be a little bit more detailed ideas on the ancient families, the royal family, and in total about the entire world itself. Actually, world development might be the only glaring weakness for this novel. This is a personal opinion so Actually, I wish for a harem but it's okay if it isn't, BUT PLEASE PLEASE don't make every girl every girl fall in love with members of their own group. Don't ship every member of Evelyne's party within themselves, I will literally go into a depression. Yuri is okay but multiple yuri is big NO-NO for me Overall a good job author-san, I loved it and it feels really interesting to read. I have big hopes for the future. You are one of my favorite authors on this site and I thank you from bottom of my heart for writing such a good novel.