Review Detail of Cowac in The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
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It's only 10 chapters in so I can't say for sure, but so far I love the story. I like how you put so much attention into everything (unless it's all random, which I hope is not), all characters and things have names, but I don't feel forced to remember them, Very good. It's not bad to not have names on everything but I like it this way, The system setup is very good and detailed. It looks like everything means something, so I like it. There is one thing very important to me. If you can answer me this, please. I will not ask too much, just tell me roughly how long the story is going to be? Short, Medium, Long? This much hint is fine. Now I will nitpick, if you like good critique you can take it. If you don't please ignore below text. If I had to pick one thing I hate the most about it, it's that the only info on the world and system we're getting is based on what the MC thinks so it makes me doubt everything. I don't know if it's a bad thing or good thing. Another nitpick. I think you should do 2 updates a day. Your story has a lot of detail so the pacing is very slow even if it looks fast when reading, which I don't like personally.
The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
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Thanks for the reply, and for not deleting my review. Sorry if I sound angry but after being a silent reader here for weeks today I finally made an account and reviewed all the novels I've been reading and everyone just deleted my reivews except this one. I put a lot of heart into writing it too. I wish it all got bugged and deleted and my favorite authors are not like that, but yeah, I'm angry. Not at you but this community in general. Its not like I rated your story bad, so don't just silence me because you can (not talking to you author sorry if this seems offensive). Anyway thanks for listening and answering my questions. I'll continue to support you!
I'm glad you like the story so far! Not sure of the exact length of the story, but I've been working on the plot for this story for almost a year now (though not all the time, I'll admit) so it's definitely going to be 'very long'. I'll try to explain things whenever they come up in the story, don't worry. And it's always fun discovering new things along with the main character, don't you think? As for the updates... I can't promise anything, but I'll probably find it easier to write once we get the main plot going.
Cowac:Thanks for the reply, and for not deleting my review. Sorry if I sound angry but after being a silent reader here for weeks today I finally made an account and reviewed all the novels I've been reading and everyone just deleted my reivews except this one. I put a lot of heart into writing it too. I wish it all got bugged and deleted and my favorite authors are not like that, but yeah, I'm angry. Not at you but this community in general. Its not like I rated your story bad, so don't just silence me because you can (not talking to you author sorry if this seems offensive). Anyway thanks for listening and answering my questions. I'll continue to support you!