I’ll start off by saying the grammar isn’t fantastic. The FF is eligible but it is sometimes perplexing how badly something can be spelled. The characters’ introductions are redundant but it isn’t much of a problem. Plus, most characters are canon so we don’t really need a description. The story background is Naruto so I don’t have much to say here. There doesn’t seem to be much of a plot so far and there are some plot holes but whatever. The update rate seems absurd but not sure if that’s because these chapters are stocked up chapters or they really were written so fast. Im on chapter 5 so far and I honestly don’t see much of a problem with it. The quality isn’t great but if you’re bored then give it a read. Ah, obviously this is wish fulfillment so expect some BS (plotholes).
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