Review Detail of TimelessImmortal in His Baby Boy

This was my first ever introduction to ddlb and it did quite well. After reading the existing chapters (20) I felt like i knew what was going on at all times- even though I had no previous knowledge of ddlb. I have since gone on to look for other novels with ddlb and have felt quite underwhelmed. I feel like i have bee spoiled by this book. None of the other books i read, other than the author’s other story, come close to the storytelling experience this novel gave me. I have nothing bad to say about this story other than the need for proper tense consistency.