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Well.......... First things first, I got curious with the sinopse so I give it a chance, but once started the first chapter I already wanted to drop this, the way it's writteni t'sterrible and the dialogs get confused 'cause the author didn't organizedit in a way to make clear who's talking. Even with such a problem, I continued to read, since every story deserves a chance. However there it is when the second problem arrived, the development is hushed and seems too forced, the characters don't seem to being thought before their were written. I stopped at chapter 7, because I couldn't endure anymore of this.

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