webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of Eins_Mensch in --;-;-;-

Review detail

Eins_Mensch
Eins_MenschLv142yrEins_Mensch

Dont take the rate serious since i dont finished the book to its current progression, but what i saw is a good idea behind this book but the making is more like doing before thinking, that reflects in sentence building and grammar problems and so ruins the overall story. No matter how good a story/idea is, bad grammar and bad sentence building can drag the story down.

altalt

--;-;-;-

TacetIrae

Liked it!

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!