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Winzentwinni
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2021-11-25 00:44

The story... What should I say... After the first chapter I was already tempted to drop it but I persisted through all 40 free chapters. My short review would be: the first 15 or so chapters (except for the first ~2) had the ability to make me laugh because of some nice side characters that got me some comical relief. Sadly when the mc moves towards his next target he leaves them behind (like I said: side characters). โญ๐ŸŒ‘๐ŸŒ‘๐ŸŒ‘๐ŸŒ‘ The story is about an OP military male that comes out of prison after a mission and sees his family in peril. Now he's out for revenge. It's the cliche face slapping. He goes around seeking revenge on family after family. Those "esteemed" families feel offended by his actions and his brute force, things escalate and the family gets eradicated. Many things also involve his adopted sister but surprise surprise they are actually in love. You should not that the genre of this novel is magical realism. In general everything seems "normal" but the MC and his strongest subordinates (of course generals from the military) have some cultivation kind of martial arts skills. (MC can crush people with his aura if he for once doesn't decide to beat them up himself.) Character design and development... There isn't any of it really. Mc seems shallow and nowhere like a military person should seem. He has anger and control issues and seems very superficial. There isn't much information about the world background, just that the MC is the almighty and every military person looks up to him etc. There are also loopholes in general that aren't really explained (yet). Like he was framed by his business partner that landed him in prison for 5 years and then a strong guy picked him up and like this he somehow got into the military where he now has unimaginable high achievements etc but at the same time it was said he went to military for a top secret reason and nobody knew about this or that he was in the military before jail time. If you're searching for a short break from your current novels but don't want to start a complete new one that you have to finish eventually because it's too good, the first few chapters of this novel might be just right (if you like cliche face slapping and can bare with not so deep characters). You definitely won't get attached. If you want something worth your coins... Better not. I think it's kinda sad because the general plot could be a pretty good face slapping novel if done perfectly. Sadly the author lacks the ability.

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Golden_Exprience
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bro just after reading your review I want to commit suicide

Winzentwinni
WinzentwinniLv15

Why?

Golden_Exprience:bro just after reading your review I want to commit suicide
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Golden_Exprience
Golden_ExprienceLv4

reading your review make me wanna commit suicide because if I had read the novel i would be dead by now so thanks for saving my soul from this mental pollution disguise as a novel ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚

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Winzentwinni
WinzentwinniLv15

You're welcome ๐Ÿ˜†

Golden_Exprience:reading your review make me wanna commit suicide because if I had read the novel i would be dead by now so thanks for saving my soul from this mental pollution disguise as a novel ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚
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