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2021-09-01 02:52

To call mc an manipulator than to say he’s on “justice” side is annoying

danmachi manipulator

grimmmz
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39 Chs

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grimmmzAuthor

I am Author, I have read your review, let me clear one thing for you, Roy is not the 'manipulator' in the story even though he is the protagonist. The manipulator in the story is the second protagonist, who is a >100 year old high elf, about who, you will know in the future , I planning to make this book around 1000 chapters and making a long run, dispite it being my first book, Story is going to be somewhat slow pace , currently I am doing the character development on 1st protagonist(Roy) side, it will take some time for you to see the the whole 'manipulator' thing, but honestly believe me, it is going to be a thrilling one, I don't like mc's becoming overpowered with a cheat in 2-3 chapters , getting girls left and right and face slapping everyone and going from one anime world to other , my plot is going to be complex, if you ignore the grammatical errors and 'manipulator' in the title for time being, you will enjoy the story, if you don't the balls to wait,just avoid my book, Seriously , no offence here~~ but anyways thank you for your review, you are the first person to review me on my first book, if you have any suggestions or complaints, if you say them to me, I will do my best to make my book even better.

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Seikai
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grimmmz:I am Author, I have read your review, let me clear one thing for you, Roy is not the 'manipulator' in the story even though he is the protagonist. The manipulator in the story is the second protagonist, who is a >100 year old high elf, about who, you will know in the future , I planning to make this book around 1000 chapters and making a long run, dispite it being my first book, Story is going to be somewhat slow pace , currently I am doing the character development on 1st protagonist(Roy) side, it will take some time for you to see the the whole 'manipulator' thing, but honestly believe me, it is going to be a thrilling one, I don't like mc's becoming overpowered with a cheat in 2-3 chapters , getting girls left and right and face slapping everyone and going from one anime world to other , my plot is going to be complex, if you ignore the grammatical errors and 'manipulator' in the title for time being, you will enjoy the story, if you don't the balls to wait,just avoid my book, Seriously , no offence here~~ but anyways thank you for your review, you are the first person to review me on my first book, if you have any suggestions or complaints, if you say them to me, I will do my best to make my book even better.
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Seikai
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why is mc helping bell so much.even aft having so many cheats mc is lagging behind bell.to be honest it feels as if mc is a side character..

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Sweetwallzz
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I see potential so i saved it in my library. Gonna read when it has more chaps and decide if i am goong to keep the 5 stars or not. Good luck Author-san

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Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Don’t name your fanfic “Danmachi manipulator” if he isn’t a manipulator at all, and instead, some side character is. Stupid author clickbait

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Autistically
AutisticallyLv13

i donyt like the aspect of second protagonist... it's kind of annoying to.think and mc despite having great potential is not shown to have used it as much .. story is kind of fast paced ..could have a given more stability and dept to the character and have more interactions with others rather then only showing thier thinking most of the time ..

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story is improving i like it..................................................................................................................

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