Concept is really good it just need some editing as I read more than dozen times where it was written her instead of he and it is sucks to read it like that but it can be fixed easliy with about at most 10 or so minutes of reading and editing. Which is really needed.

Did you know ... the Walkerkers are not afraid of anything? If they were used as well-equipped weapons of war, they would be the best soldiers.

Absolute trash. I’m starting to think the MC is in love with his grandma by how much he talks about her. Literally not a single chapter can go by where he doesn’t bring his grandma into a conversation.

The Grammer is pretty wack along with the awkward English just makes it really hard to read the plot is meh just basic walking dead stuff with nothing really new introduced mc has nothing special about him

I like that the walking dead fanfic;) normally on a walking dead fanfiction I don't like that the mc doesn't know the world (isekai, reincarnation) but I love it. I can't wait to see more (chapter 5)

Loads of her in chapters including the way of writing seems quite stiff like, "Daniel stops" where you can just change it to something like this. "Daniel stopped" My only issue is how you wrote the fanfic and the characters dialogue, but everything else seems pretty good.

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Because one person spammed 5 stars three times, I will also spam 1 star three times to have a balance............................................................................................................................................................................

10/10 the best 'The Walking Dead' fanfic on this site. I hope to continue enjoying this beautiful fanfic 👌👌👌💪💪💪🇦🇷🇦🇷🇦🇷 ..................................