Review Detail of ThisNovelSucksBro in I am Rimuru Tempest(Old Version. Rewrite is out.)
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Writing Quality = 4/5 Stability of Updates 2/5 Story Development 1/5 Character Design 2/5 World Background 2/5 Loved it when I first read 80-90 chapters, came back to it after more released and it just became boring. I couldn't find myself enjoying anything and it felt like the MC was the side character not to mention uninteresting.
I am Rimuru Tempest(Old Version. Rewrite is out.)
BonAurevoir
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I will agree that I pushed the mc more into the background near the end of the story. There are two reasons as to why I did it. 1.) I made him too op so it would just be boring if the very end of the story was. "I teleport there and fix everything and boom its over.(which sort of did happen) 2.) It kind of felt like I had reached the end of Rimuru’s character. I had been writing him for months now and I wanted to try writing different characters and their perspectives. I do agree that this could some people off from the story at the end and it's a good thing to keep in mind for future stories. Thanks for the review, and thanks for reading.
I get you, don't think I was insulting the novel or anything. You write very well it's just by then end I personally didn't enjoy it, it's nothing objective or anything.
BonAurevoir:I will agree that I pushed the mc more into the background near the end of the story. There are two reasons as to why I did it. 1.) I made him too op so it would just be boring if the very end of the story was. "I teleport there and fix everything and boom its over.(which sort of did happen) 2.) It kind of felt like I had reached the end of Rimuru’s character. I had been writing him for months now and I wanted to try writing different characters and their perspectives. I do agree that this could some people off from the story at the end and it's a good thing to keep in mind for future stories. Thanks for the review, and thanks for reading.
Yeah, I get that. Reviews like yours help me to keep in mind what things to change and to remember for the future.
ThisNovelSucksBro:I get you, don't think I was insulting the novel or anything. You write very well it's just by then end I personally didn't enjoy it, it's nothing objective or anything.