Review Detail of N0_Hope in I am Rimuru Tempest
Review detail
Writing Quality 1/5 Stability of Updates : 5/5 Story Development : 2/5 Character Design: 1/5 World Background :2/5 The story had a great start, a great main idea and it seemed good on the first chapter..... However, the constant usage of weird sentences that are used in cultivation killed the entire immersion feeling and destroyed the isekai mood . I didn't came to read those weird and disgusting lines .... People in cultivation worlds seem to be born with tumors in stead of brains , talking in third character or refering himself in a different perspectives makes the reading vomitive...
I am Rimuru Tempest
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Why would I bother to write such a specific evaluation if it wasn't how I felt. Of course is better to try and understand . Maybe you like cultivation in which case go for it but if you hate that as much as I do then please search another story.
Benedict_ravia:This true or bull?
N0_Hope:Why would I bother to write such a specific evaluation if it wasn't how I felt. Of course is better to try and understand . Maybe you like cultivation in which case go for it but if you hate that as much as I do then please search another story.
yes, there is disgusting cultivation talking . It's so forced and it's so much it made me want to break the monitor.
Benedict_ravia:im talking about the cultivation part.
Nope there's no cultivation just normal tensura abilities, he's talking about the way some characters talk, and that happend only in the first chapters.
Benedict_ravia:im talking about the cultivation part.
bull, its just only in one chapter, and only several sentence. and I wouldn't call it cultivation thingy either, it just the situation make the dialog into kind of too respectfull
Benedict_ravia:This true or bull?
No there isn't really any cultivation. The first few chapters I over exaggerated the way some people talked and it doe sound a bit weird. Hopefully it is better now in the newer chapters. There isn't any Young master talk or anything like that. Basically I made the goblins talk weird when they first met. Now it should be better
Benedict_ravia:im talking about the cultivation part.
N0_Hope:yes, there is disgusting cultivation talking . It's so forced and it's so much it made me want to break the monitor.
You are being too soft with your words. They are pure cancer, something that deserves total and complete anihilation. Their brains never work properly as they are made with dog feces and their education and values are non existent. the way they treat anyone and the level of civilization speaks miles on how disgusting of living beings they are. The fact that cultivation sometimes tries to imitate magic or implement it but fail every and all times shows of how little imagination all creators have, they try to copy all their stories and even most mangas are just copies of copies. They should be ashamed of even touching a fking computer yet they still believe normal people like to read a manga with a title as long as a poem . Mechanics of the world, education , way of talking , level of civilization and honor are something non existent in those stories. fk cultivation and all their worlds.
Bob_Uchiha_XD:True +Cultivation = +mental retardation and autism
N0_Hope:You are being too soft with your words. They are pure cancer, something that deserves total and complete anihilation. Their brains never work properly as they are made with dog feces and their education and values are non existent. the way they treat anyone and the level of civilization speaks miles on how disgusting of living beings they are. The fact that cultivation sometimes tries to imitate magic or implement it but fail every and all times shows of how little imagination all creators have, they try to copy all their stories and even most mangas are just copies of copies. They should be ashamed of even touching a fking computer yet they still believe normal people like to read a manga with a title as long as a poem . Mechanics of the world, education , way of talking , level of civilization and honor are something non existent in those stories. fk cultivation and all their worlds.
ZaWarudoo:Most of them are coming out of China. I think it's pretty self-explanatory.
