quite cool starting but which type of devil fruit will it be logia, mythical zoan or paramecia or a combined. overall story is coming wonderful presentation is also good words are good hope you maintain the updates daily.

Don't mind me, just another passerby reader. Honestly though, for these reviews straight up tell me your opinion. I like the criticism as it helps me improve as not just an author, but also a student. I have big plans for the future, so stick around.

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All I can say about this book is you have to invest in it. This got a potential to be a really good fan-fic surpassing the first ones that came before it.