Review Detail of Notaduck in IP: Lich's Sticky Note Adventure

Random review/update on my own book lol. Anyways, this is for Vol12 and specifically the story for ch276. I have put a lot of effort for this part of the story and was hoping if you get to read it, leave a comment or review as I really want to know how well it compares to other stories. The reason being is I want to know of ways to make it better or rather what you felt wasn’t good enough.