Review Detail of AngelEgoTrip in Reborn as a Dothraki (GOT SI) [haitus]

ThIs fanfic is somewhat disappointing hence the low review. Here are my reasons. Writing Quality: I didn’t see too many problems in terms of grammar aside from a few sentences that didn’t make sense so three stars. Updating Stability :Don’t know how often author updates so five stars Story Development: The reason I was interested in the fanfic in the first place was because of the title I thought the mc would perhaps get stronger, train for a while fight in some wars and then challenge drogo for his place or create his own khalasar and conquer territory and challenge drogo but instead he’s in the khalasar for a little while and then leaves like whats the point of the story being named being reincarnated as a dothraki might as well call it being Reincarnated in GOT. and then shanks is put into the world shank… Like why im so confused so 2 stars. Character Development: There’s not much to talk about considering the amount of time skips from what I see the mc is kinda plain and tries to be a good person i can’t talk much about the side characters cause i forgot there names they were also plain. So two stars. World Development: Most of is already made for him hence why it is a fanfic but he tries to add cultivation into the story for some reason??? so one star Overall im kinda disappointed he chose to leave the khalasar so early considering it was the entire reason I wanted to read it.