writing quality is good. nothing to say here but keep it up. the stroy development, for me, is balance. a little bit of the mcs past through prologues are okay. character designs are on point. its vivid in my imagination [img=recommend] and their personality comes out. updates .i couldnt say anything since its a new novel world background, we'll see in the fture. its still new keep up the good work [img=recommend]
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