Review Detail of Eking_James in PLEASE READ NOTICE

I really enjoyed this story in the view of an abused little boy who found hope through a character on the cover of a book. It's a really nice idea that I don't think has been used as much. The writing was very nice and easy to follow with only a few slip ups. I will say that Souta's journey through school felt rushed. I would've loved to see an entire chapter about what he went through during that time instead of rushing through it. The character description of Iris was very beautiful. I didn't see many descriptions about the location/environments the characters were in, I would love to see that added. The story also has some elements of tell and don't show like during the beginning of the Iris segment. All in all, this story is very well done. it's mistakes are keeping it back though these mistakes are very easy to fix. I wish you luck in your journey to improving!