very good story. Plot writing is very interesting and intrigued me. especially in writing the prologue is also interesting. I learned a lot while reading this. but what I noticed is, the lack of depth to the characters written when giving the impression of Dark or sad. well, I know because it's still early so... nevermind. apart from that, good job and keep the spirit to write
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